{i wrote this for some guy whom said it was not personal enough for him.}
So unexpectedly you showed up in my life, too perfect to be true
From that first day i knew that i loved you
You taught me so many new things
Thinking about it makes old memories sing
but time changes people
Our hearts that once fit grew out of beat
We use to be so perfect , now all we taste is defeat
So it’s time to move on, to let go of the past
Maybe in the future our paths will once cross
But for now this is my last goodbye
To the boy i used love.
December 18, 2015 at 12:26 pm
Absolutely beautiful! This guy never deserved someone as amazing as you*
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December 25, 2015 at 7:19 am
A lovely poem, if not a bit naive. It could use some editing here and there (the line “You thought me so many new things” in particular), but it’s a very bittersweet poem, and I like that. Keep up the good work with your blog!
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December 27, 2015 at 8:49 am
i do apologise it seems i made a bit of a spelling error but thank you so much for all of your feed back. i started this blog as just a way to let out all my inner thoughts and feelings and knowing that people can relate makes me feel less alone. thank you so much!
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